2015年6月9日星期二
Healing Camp.SHELF PROJECT #2
In this project,we talked about each others' problems and tried to find solutions or give advice to others.It just liked the normal communication among friends.And we hope we can share ours problems,and at the same time,we can solve our problems through talking with others .
Grammar Mistakes.
1.(1:13)I'm a four grades(?)
- I'm a senior student.
2.(1:23)Maybe everyone may be problem with this problem.
- Maybe everyone will be puzzled by this problem.
3.(2:32)Maybe it will be problem with eating some foods,or making a friends.
- Maybe the food cultural differences,or the interpersonal relationship will be the problem.
4.(6:36)Many big companies want to hire for the experience in the abroad.
- Many major companies want to hire people who have the experience of studying abroad.
5.(16:44)The more healthy,the more smart,my baby.
- My baby will be healthier and smarter.
6.(23:26)Another wrong is..
- Another problem is..
7.(27:23)it such as a hobbit...
- it just like a hobbit..
8.(29:40)They used to we respectful words.
- They talk with us in respectful language.
9.(29:47)She is problem is..
- Her problem is..
After the talking,we solved our problems,and also,we had a nice time with others~
Grammar Mistakes.
1.(1:13)I'm a four grades(?)
- I'm a senior student.
2.(1:23)Maybe everyone may be problem with this problem.
- Maybe everyone will be puzzled by this problem.
3.(2:32)Maybe it will be problem with eating some foods,or making a friends.
- Maybe the food cultural differences,or the interpersonal relationship will be the problem.
4.(6:36)Many big companies want to hire for the experience in the abroad.
- Many major companies want to hire people who have the experience of studying abroad.
5.(16:44)The more healthy,the more smart,my baby.
- My baby will be healthier and smarter.
6.(23:26)Another wrong is..
- Another problem is..
7.(27:23)it such as a hobbit...
- it just like a hobbit..
8.(29:40)They used to we respectful words.
- They talk with us in respectful language.
9.(29:47)She is problem is..
- Her problem is..
After the talking,we solved our problems,and also,we had a nice time with others~
2015年5月8日星期五
After watching the videos.SHELF PROJECT #1
After watching the videos of our SHELF Projects,I found some sentences may should be improved.
How can I explain these thoughts clearlier? Will it be better if I say it in this way?
1.First,this title could be design.It means which is cooler,which brand is more cooler than other?
- The first topic of our discussion is the design of phones.Which one has a cooler design than others？which phone appearance design looks better?
2.the design is more better than iPhone
- design of Samsung is much better than iPhone's.
3.I think don't cheaper than Samsung
- I don't think the price of iPhone is higher than Samsung.
4.But the layout is simple,everything about iPhone just have a clean symbol and name.
- The layout is simple,with everything given a clear symbol and name.
5.We can just use one button,that's OK,and that's earlier for people to use it.
- It's earlier for people to control it with one button.
6.It always broken quickly.
- It always breaks quickly.
7.She doesn't introduce her friends.
- She doesn't introduce her boyfriend to her friends.
8.I just think this girl have some other thoughts about this boy.
- I think,maybe this girl thought too much and she had some fantasies about this boy.
BTW,I really like our videos~ and hope all of us can make progress together~ ^^
How can I explain these thoughts clearlier? Will it be better if I say it in this way?
1.First,this title could be design.It means which is cooler,which brand is more cooler than other?
- The first topic of our discussion is the design of phones.Which one has a cooler design than others？which phone appearance design looks better?
2.the design is more better than iPhone
- design of Samsung is much better than iPhone's.
3.I think don't cheaper than Samsung
- I don't think the price of iPhone is higher than Samsung.
4.But the layout is simple,everything about iPhone just have a clean symbol and name.
- The layout is simple,with everything given a clear symbol and name.
5.We can just use one button,that's OK,and that's earlier for people to use it.
- It's earlier for people to control it with one button.
6.It always broken quickly.
- It always breaks quickly.
7.She doesn't introduce her friends.
- She doesn't introduce her boyfriend to her friends.
8.I just think this girl have some other thoughts about this boy.
- I think,maybe this girl thought too much and she had some fantasies about this boy.
BTW,I really like our videos~ and hope all of us can make progress together~ ^^
2015年4月19日星期日
SHELF Project.
I'd like to make a TV show named WHERE IS THE HOTTEST FOOD?
As we know,many Korean people like spicy food very much.And there are some really spicy food in Korea.But there are also many spicy food in other countries.For example,as a girl from Chongqing,China,I really enjoy spicy food.And in my hometown,there are so many food that is really spicy and people in my city also like spicy food very much.
We can go to some places where are famous for spicy food in Korea.And we can have some missions that are connected with learning English,such as remembering English words,if someone fail, he/she must try these food or he/she can't enjoy the food that he/she really like.Then make this as a show.
The process of learning English should be interesting and useful,and it may be a good way for us students to learning English with fun.
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