2015年6月9日星期二

Healing Camp.SHELF PROJECT #2

In this project,we talked about each others' problems and tried to find solutions or give advice to others.It just liked the normal communication among friends.And we hope we can share ours problems,and at the same time,we can solve our problems through talking with others .

Grammar Mistakes.

1.(1:13)I'm a four grades(?)
- I'm a senior student.

2.(1:23)Maybe everyone may be problem with this problem.
- Maybe everyone will be puzzled by this problem.

3.(2:32)Maybe it will be problem with eating some foods,or making a friends.
- Maybe the food cultural differences,or the interpersonal relationship will be the problem.

4.(6:36)Many big companies want to hire for the experience in the abroad.
- Many major companies want to hire people who have the experience of studying abroad.

5.(16:44)The more healthy,the more smart,my baby.
- My baby will be healthier and smarter.

6.(23:26)Another wrong is..
- Another problem is..

7.(27:23)it such as a hobbit...
- it just like a hobbit..

8.(29:40)They used to we respectful words.
- They talk with us in respectful language.

9.(29:47)She is problem is..
- Her problem is..

After the talking,we solved our problems,and also,we had a nice time with others~

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